Monday, January 9, 2012

Is my Prologue any good? ?

I really like it. I think Alex's thoughts are a little more developed than a seven year-old's mind usually is. It is really suspenseful. I would love to read more and I'm sure a lot of people would really enjoy this book. You should definitely continue. Good job for actually starting a story. I always try but can never get it flowing. There are only a few spelling or grammatical errors, which is good.

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